Authors Note: In this poem, it demonstrates deliberate and saturated diction. I use the symbols of twilight, fog, moon and many others. Since chapters 4 through 7 were mysterious and it was unsure of who did what; that is the emotion that I was trying to portray. In addition, I also portrayed a small amount of illusive confusion in the poem regarding Jekyll and Hyde as the same people.
Fog disperses a pale moon
While it appears in the twilight
Creating a distant moon to shine
Faintly uncovering the hidden night
Onlookers contain mysterious curiosity
Eyes traveling with the heavy fog
Trying to escape it’s deathly animosity
Unsuspectingly it seeps into the minds of the unknown
Changing the spirit from night to day
Reaping what was previously sown
A shield of blanketing fog erupts
As the chained soul unleashes
Hyde’s prevailing darkness corrupts
As the frail window creeps to a close
Evil diffuses throughout the night
Leaving only a shadow of fear only Jekyll knows.
I really like your poem because It was really descriptive and gives a message of how the nature of the weather and time made emotions in the story. Try to add more emotion towards Jekyll's confusion. Other than that good job!
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